Friday, July 26, 2019

My Writing

Hi guys welcome back to my blog.

Today I have got writing blog post about what I have been doing at writing time. I have been learning about describing instead of telling. So if you are telling you are saying "I" but if you are describing you are saying "The".



1.The lightning struck the water with such force to fling it up 4 metres in the air
2.The thunder made the world shake

3.The dark and moody sky looked like we were in a galaxy because of the light from the cracks of lightning  


I hope you like this blog post and I have also got a picture to tell you what I have been describing instead of telling. Please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post have a nice rest of the day and week.BYE

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